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Member Since: 10/17/2011
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Feedback for those who asked...
If you'd also like feedback, too late! Although you can ask anyway and I might go and type some up for you, depends how late it gets and how tired I am.
P.S - I could have wrote a lot more (and have, to Matty) but I wanted to keep a little mystery in my picks, so my comments are quite vague, ha sorry!
Jezang: Well thought out highlights, you'd clearly taken time to consider and find those posts. Although the last one i'm not too sure about. You come across very respectful.
conatus: The quote within a quote thing reminds me of my early Games section days when I couldn't figure out how to make text look good in an entry (tip: use the table format and it won't italicize your font when quoted). ATRL's new top poster (rip Remmy). I think your 3 highlights seem very genuine and I respect the honesty in the fact you've made effort to "clean up" your image.
X/O/X/O: Your app was focused on a redemption story, although I think this is something that will be seen with time and isn't easy to show in a short app. The highlights were well thought out.
Ganja: You definitely came across as very real. I think you'd definitely be a lively addition to the Game, but i'm not sure on the brand you're presenting.
JakeKills: The app was a little text heavy to be honest. You spoke a lot of truth and made some very convincing and well thought out points, you just need to (delete it fat) trim some of it and keep the important parts.
HausOfNiko: The app was a little sparse, but it reminded me of some previous players.
Bey_Rihstan: You are the definition of tenacious, you definitely nailed that point. Bags of potential in this app, but will it get wasted (again)?
Buddy!: This app was packed full of achievements and accomplishments, if you wanted to sell yourself, it's definitely working at that.
theus: A very brave (admitting you aren't a top member yet) and honest application. I see potential in this app.
A Bomb: App was very adorable, what else from a Disney stan though?
FunkyDinevo: It's very clear what you offer to this Game, from this app. Bags of personality.
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