Break the Skyline (Jezang Looz) : Nothing in this song really stopped me in my tracks. Maybe you could reply to this comment and give me a breakdown on what each stanza of this song means in relation to the song’s whole context? Why did his/her heart stop beating? If he/she is dead, what does that have to do with breaking the skyline? 5
Is that 5 my score? And sure I can come up with a breakdown of each stanza if you'd like but will that change my scoring or are you just curious as to what the song meant? I was told we don't usually write mockups of what the song means/how it sounds but if you'd like an explanation I'd be happy to oblige. Thanks for the feedback though
Is that 5 my score? And sure I can come up with a breakdown of each stanza if you'd like but will that change my scoring or are you just curious as to what the song meant? I was told we don't usually write mockups of what the song means/how it sounds but if you'd like an explanation I'd be happy to oblige. Thanks for the feedback though
You don't but right now I was wondering if you could do one because I'm confused by your song.
Tidal Wave (Obsession) : I liked how you interpreted your picture and didn’t just go for the literal. That first line is a great example of a first line that grabs you and forces you to pay attention. (For those who are reading other people’s comments, the line is “Since we first met, I’ve been afraid of your power”.) There’s a certain charm to this song, the more times I read it the more I like it. The best I’ve seen from you so far!
beebee they are still post where you quoted it on the last page
People already saw them, so I didn't bother.
But next time, noone should say "tell TT to post them sooner " cause that's what happens when I rush. The reviews were supposed to be posted 10 minutes later
" cause that's what happens when I rush. The reviews were supposed to be posted 10 minutes later 
