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 All ReviewsAgainst All Odds - I didn’t really like some of the lines in the first verse such as the stare one and the alien one. But, I really liked the pre-chorus and chorus and they were well written.
All I Have - There are a couple lines I felt were awkward, such as the pit line and I felt the chorus could’ve been a little longer.
All Of Me - Such a beautifully written song. You can definitely feel the emotions in the lyrics.
Another Day In Paradise - I liked the concept you had going for the song. But, I didn’t really like a few lines here and there.
Bad - This is such a great concept. And it so sad when people try to deny their sexualities. You managed to display these feelings on both sides (sorta) very well.
Bad Medicine - This is so well written and it flows very well. I don’t have any problems with this. It awkwardly reminds me of the Shakira song with the same title.
Believe - This was a very cute bop. I wasn’t really feeling the first verse but the pre-chorus and chorus were pretty inspiring and remind me something that would be a cute love-yourself and take control of your life song.
Blame It On The Rain - I didn’t really like the skin line since it was so awkward. But, this was a great song.
Broken Wings - I liked most of the first verse but there was a line here or there that felt weirdly constructed and used. I really liked the first half of the chorus, but wasn’t feeling the second.
Burn - I didn’t really like the first verse and it had a very awkward flow to it. But, I enjoyed the pre-chorus (my favorite part) and liked the first half of the chorus.
Diamonds - I really enjoyed the first verse and the pre-chorus but I wasn’t really feeling the chorus much during certain parts.
End Of The Road - Your lyricism is great! The first verse especially, it was is well written I didn’t really like the chorus much at all and didn’t think it was as good.
Every Breath You Take - This song was very moving as it made me think of me crush and how important he is to me. Slay me with this relatable bop.
Faith - I thought the concept was pretty interesting and different from the usual concepts that I see. I liked the chorus the best.
Fancy - I really liked the song until I got up to the chorus honestly, the chorus just wasn’t as good as the verse/pre-chorus.
Fantasy - I really liked the new concept, it was a very interesting take on the song. I liked the whole dark direction you were going far too. I do think some of the lyrics feel misplaced and awkward.
Firework - I really liked the song and meaning but I felt like this didn’t really have a flow so it made the song seem a bit jumbled up.
Happy - This song is so touching. The lyrics are beautifully written and tell a great story. You impressed me again.
I’ll Be Missing You - The chorus is so raw and filled with emotions. I had to keep together my composure ngl.
Irreplaceable - Great lyricism! Especially in the first verse, I love the line about the planets falling from the sky. The chorus was great too but I preferred the verse.
Just Give Me A Reason - I didn’t like the first verse, it just seemed awkward to me at times. I did like the chorus and bridge more though.
Like A Prayer - I didn’t really like the Adam and Eve reference, it felt a little forced and awkward. But, I loved the chorus.
Live Your Life - This song was very sweet and moving. My favorite part was the chorus since I’m a sucker for happy endings.
Love The Way You Lie - While the flow of the first verse was very clunky I still really liked the first verse, you definitely showed emotion in your song. I liked the chorus too but the verse impressed me more.
Magic - I liked what you had for the song but I felt like you could’ve had a stronger punch with your song for the chorus to really wow me.
Nothing Compares 2 U - I didn’t really like the first verse at all much, but when the chorus kicked in I started bopping a little, it was an improvement.
Rapture - I didn’t really have any problems with this song but it just didn’t have that punch that it was building up too.
See You Again - I wasn’t really feeling the first verse and the flow was awkward, but I liked the chorus more.
Shout - I really liked the first verse but I felt there were a few bad lines here and there, that could use tweaking. I liked the chorus but I wasn’t fond of the repeating of some words.
Smooth - I really liked the first verse and was lowkey bopping to it. I didn’t really like the chorus though and didn’t think it was as good.
Somebody That I Used To Know - I liked the lyrics but the song didn’t have a proper structure or flow.
Someone Like You - I liked where you were trying to go with the song but I felt like it was awkward at times, mainly the first verse.
Teenage Dream - This is amazing. I wasn’t ready to be scalped so hard. I didn’t have any problems with the song. Now write the full song and record it so I can get my life for years to come.
The First Night - I liked the whole idea with using card references but some lines like the last one in the first verse and the pre-chorus were kind of awkward.
The Monster - I really liked the song but I don’t think it had that final punch to made me love it.
Time After Time - I felt like the first verse was kind of rushed, like it felt like you cut off a couple lines beforehand which made it feel so rushed.
Together Again - This song kinda reminds me of a song that would be on an early Mariah album. I know I said this last round, but this is giving me a Daydream or Music Box tea. In a good way.
Touch My Body - This is such a bop! I was very impressed by this song and think this is way better than your entry last week.
Try Again - I liked the song but I felt that a couple lines here and there were used just to rhyme, and that you could’ve gone in harder with better words like rhyming mad/sad.
Waterfalls - I really liked the first verse, but I thought the chorus were a little shaky.
Wrecking Ball - I think that your chorus could have been longer since it felt like it was cut off too short.
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I appreciate it a ton. I was beating myself up a lot over this song. 
