What was it about my song you didn't like again? The "Should have known you were too blind to see this" lyric? Is it because the too is stressed and sounds a bit odd?
The lyric I pointed out was the violent wounds line. Everything else was fine.
The lyric I pointed out was the violent wounds line. Everything else was fine.
But I loved that inside rhyme. It's supposed to reference the long lasting effects even after an initial confrontation is over. But I guess it could come across as a bit clumsily worded.
But I loved that inside rhyme. It's supposed to reference the long lasting effects even after an initial confrontation is over. But I guess it could come across as a bit clumsily worded.
I didn't like the phrase violent wounds. I didn't take off a single decimal for that though and it's not very important. I think I gave you a 9.5 anyway, so the song was top notch
I didn't like the phrase violent wounds. I didn't take off a single decimal for that though and it's not very important. I think I gave you a 9.5 anyway, so the song was top notch
What really matters though is that I snatched a 10 from TT
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Originally posted by conatus
Truthy needs to gather the gorls who still haven't submitted!
It's supposed to reference the long lasting effects even after an initial confrontation is over. But I guess it could come across as a bit clumsily worded.
