I kind of took a risk with the latest song I wrote
http://atrl.net/forums/blog.php?b=17839
GUITAR ON THE RADIO
VERSE 1
All it takes is one note, one beat
To know that you have been completed
Show me that you can repeat it
Only you could get me feeling
This way, every evening
I sway on my feet and
I feel every meaning
Till it needs more repeating
PRE-CHORUS
I could dance all night
You and I, so right
So why?
Are you nowhere in sight?
Oh my.
Oh my.
Oh my, I I I
I ask all the time
Why you're not on the dial
I've thought that you're all mine
But you deserve to shine
Oh my.
Oh my
Oh my, I I I
CHORUS
You're my guitar on the radio
My heartstrings dancing more and more
Electricity starts to flow
Through my body, and onto yours
You're my guitar on the radio
You're what I want, with every part
You take me where the song goes
You're what I end up looking for
HOOK
Tell me, where did the guitar on the radio go?
Tell me, where did the guitar on the radio go?
Oh oh oh oh oh
Where did the guitar on the radio go?
VERSE 2
All it takes is one chord, one harmony
You're playing plays through all of me
You're patiently waiting for me
To get you where you wanna be
Know one day, that they'll dance with me
They'll know what they've been missing
And what you're blessed with, now come and step with
This instrument that's heaven sent
PRE-CHORUS
CHORUS
HOOK
BRIDGE 1
She wants to play, now I want her to stay
Now you all, let her have her way! x2
GUITAR SOLO
CHORUS
BRIDGE 2
She wants her part, now never let her not
She wants your heart, so give her the spotlight!
Make sure you move right
Give her the spotlight!
HOOK
It's really good. I really like the pre chorus and chorus.