I've also noticed how I'm more accustomed to writing in third person for some inane reason.
Maybe that's why Nighthawks was so good because you HAD to interpret an external source (such as those paintings), and I took on a more "onlooker" approach hmmmm what kinda epiphany
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
An outtake verse from "Al Fresco", which I may or may not use once again in the distant future
Al Fresco - OUTTAKE
Many lonesome/longing days ahead
Whilst shedding frozen tears of dread
Trudging on without a caring flair
In a world where nobody’s here nor there
It’s easier done than said
Free-falling through the cursed abyss
Strange fallacies of friendships gone amiss
The past entails your last resort
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Btw I think I'll still keep
"Whilst shedding frozen tears of dread.. In a world where nobody's here nor there.. It's easier done than said" for "Spitfire" since they're the least "prose poetry-like"
