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Originally posted by KoreanDream
See even backing off from a stan POV, I wouldn't agree with that. Let's look at her latest songs, like I Am Your Leader, Beez In The Trap, and I'm Legit. Sure she namedrops some of those accomplishments in those tracks but it's not like they're called I'm The New AI Judge or I've Got a Macy's Perfume -- that would be wack. The fact is Nicki's banter is the same as any other rapper's; I'm the sh*t, a hundred motherf*ckers can't tell me nothing, you not a believer, suck a big duck. Throwing in her accomplishments instead of just saying "I've got stacks on stacks on stacks, I beez in the trap" may be a bit more "for stans" but it doesn't make it as unrelatable as you imply.
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Actually those are examples of doing it right.
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Bitches ain't ****, and they ain't sayin' nuthin'
A hundred mutha****as can't tell me nuthin'
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Bitch, I spit that crack
Like I'm in that trap
So if you need a hit, then I'm with that bat
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I bought a couple 9′s, plus the k's with me
I breeze through queens to check some bad bitches
I stunt so hard, assess the damages
Cause this that aw, this is that aw
And yes I body bitches go get the bandages
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When I fly, it's one letter and one number
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Boarded the big jet, and got a big check
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I-I graduate with honors
I ball, Nead O' Conner
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Mother****ers know I'm the **** legit
And if a mother****er dont he can suck my dick
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No they can't keep up they molasses slow
I'm the greatest Queens bitch with the cash's flow
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That works. There's nothing annoyingly specific, there's no lame mentions of Idol or makeup or whatever endorsements. It's just plain bragging and it WORKS. The only two bits of specific bragging I see are 1) the Obama line (which works because it's OBAMA—we all want a shoutout from Obama) and 2) the Hot Topic line (which is the wackest line in the song). Beez In The Trap is everything I was talking about and that's one of the reasons why it's the most successful urban song from the album. It's a plain "I'm the ****" song, versus a "Look at all the accomplishments I've achieved which may or may not be relevant to you" song.