Hey everyone!

This is a commercial short that my brothers made as a preview of what they can do. This is their first ever time uploading something to YouTube so I thought I'd share it here to see what everyone thinks? If you like it and could share it around that'd be great!

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=FpwCsPdPdjw

Bumping this up! Views and responses would really be appreciated!

The concept behind the commercial is to imitate a retro one, right? The lighting, shots and editing are on point, for a more retro feel I would have used some dramatic zoom when the girl appears. The logo font at the end doesn't have the filter mask applied, so I would fix that too.

Overall, it's pretty good, your brothers made a pretty good effort,

Thanks! And yes it was. I'll definitely let them know the feedback.