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Originally posted by Kworb
It'll never be a hit with those verses 
The rest of the song is great  |
I was just about to post that. The second verse is sloppy I am actually disappointed in Max.
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Died last night in my dreams
All the machines had been disconnected
Time was thrown at the wind
And all of my friends had been disaffected
Now I'm searching for trust
In a city of rust, a city of vampires
Tonight Elvis is dead and everyone's spread
And love is a satire
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City of rust? City of vampires? Everyone's spread? Love is a satire? Come on
The bridge 
Though it's Adam, so that was inevitable.
