The storyline is good. Its only 2:42 minutes long but has some appreciable jumpers
The directing is not my cup of tea tho, I don't know if some directors of short films purposely have this amateur look or if they just dont know how to direct a movie.
But since the video has some special effects, im guessing they shot it like that on purpose?
(I'm not saying its a complete fail tho, the "under the bed sheet" scene isn't easy to make.)
Oh and the "rain" sound effect in the beginning is way too loud.
But all in all, I'd give it a 7,5/10
EDIT: Not me reviewing this like I'm on a movie forum
Make sure to turn off all the lights and watch it a dark room and make the video bigger for more scary effect!! 
what happens
But like I say:
but im guilty of that too