Well this is not the right place to post this....u should create a blog and ask for help ...and i think it's correct...better ask someone who speaks english very well
Almost all American children grow up watching violent shows such as "Wrestling: Raw Vs Smackdown. i think that would be better but dont take my word for it
Almost all American children grow up watching violent shows such as "Wrestling: Raw Vs Smackdown".
You might want to change "Wrestling: Raw Vs. Smackdown". That's a video game. There are the TV shows WWE Raw and the WWE Smackdown, but not Raw Vs. Smackdown.
Violence on TV is very common nowadays. Almost all american children grow watching violent shows as "Wrestling: Raw vs Smackdown" or "It´s time to destroy your neighbour´s car"
If you wanted to keep "every", then you would have to change your sentence to "Almost every American child grows up watching violent shows such as "Wrestling: Raw Vs Smackdown".
Violence on media is very common nowadays. That's why majority of children in America grew up watching violent television shows such as "Wrestling: Raw vs Smackdown"and "It´s time to destroy your neighbor´s car" to name a few.
Violence in American media is very common nowadays. That's why the majority of children in America grow up watching violent television shows such as "Wrestling: Raw vs Smackdown."
^ Minus a couple of minor errors that I corrected, you wrote the proper way to say what he wants in a professional sounding way.
almost every american kid grows up watching and listening to hannah montana and other similar disney-produced shows, from which an apathetic yet violent behaviour is spawned.
