I had low expectations, but your song exceeded them.
It would have been helpful to read the lyrics because I didn't love your friend's delivery in parts. Is the line, "The truth will help me survive?" It sounded like "true" all the time.
I must say, that was pretty good for a demo. I think if you worked on the instrumentation (unless you want that acoustic feel), found a better vocalist and recorded the song in a studio, you could totally shop the song around.
Do you want to be a songwriter?
P.S. I'm a lil drunk too.
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