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Tournament: ATRL's Next TOP MEMBER Cycle 7 | The Winner Is... For Real!
Member Since: 6/30/2010
Posts: 22,080
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Originally posted by Katie
Sent in my votes. Here are my notes:
1. Your application was in-depth and creative.
2. You gave great reasons, but I don't know how seriously you're taking this.
3. Nothing really special about yours. The standard "I am top model because..." application.
4. Fabulous application. Your quotes were perfectly used, and you gave us solid reasons.
5. Strong entry, articulate...but nothing to really set you apart.
6. Your honesty is appreciated, but there's not really much to your application.
7. Really short...you could have put more time into making it great.
8. Your application was short, but I see potential.
9. You're trying to be the bitch of this cycle? Mission accomplished.
10. One of the most creative and effective applications. A definite 'in.'
11. Did you type this on mobile? It's really really short.
12. Insipiring application, but almost...generic.
13. Excellent reasons and everything was supported. Great job.
14. It's almost as if your application was a joke and you meant to send in a different one.
15. Wonderful job in setting yourself apart, but not being bitchy. Perfect.
16. Very generic...I got no sense of who you are.
17. Everything a Top Member should be.
18. You didn't really stand out, but I think you're worth moving forward. Make it fierce from now on.
19. Wow. Flawless.
20. Your application was so-so, and your reputation may hold you back.
21. Creative, fun, and still being yourself. Perfect.
One per entry, in random order. Can you find which one is yours? 
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I'm afraid one of these is mine.  Or the "almost...generic" one because I remember using that word in a point.
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Originally posted by MrDeeds
Here to support Vulpie, hope he's still on the run

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ilu Deedsy

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ATRL Moderator
Member Since: 11/1/2010
Posts: 26,750
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Interesting that the people with the best applications are the ones assuming they got the worst critiques. Could this be an inferiority complex, or fishing for validation? 
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Member Since: 6/30/2010
Posts: 22,080
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Quote:
Originally posted by Katie
Interesting that the people with the best applications are the ones assuming they got the worst critiques. Could this be an inferiority complex, or fishing for validation? 
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They needn't be just those two reasons.  I think people tend to lower their expectations of themselves a tad to be careful, because depending on whether I assume I'm one of the people you're referring to or not, I can either come off as being cocky (if I'm wrong) or having an inferiority complex (if I'm right). Lose-lose really. 
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ATRL Moderator
Member Since: 11/1/2010
Posts: 26,750
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Quote:
Originally posted by Vulps
They needn't be just those two reasons. I think people tend to lower their expectations of themselves a tad to be careful, because depending on whether I assume I'm one of the people you're referring to or not, I can either come off as being cocky (if I'm wrong) or having an inferiority complex (if I'm right). Lose-lose really. 
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Well I'm sure with my post and the timing of it, you can infer which category you belong to 
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Member Since: 6/30/2010
Posts: 22,080
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Quote:
Originally posted by Katie
Well I'm sure with my post and the timing of it, you can infer which category you belong to 
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I was just using myself as an example. 
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 5/28/2011
Posts: 39,615
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I just woke up. When do they announce the people who get in? Friday? God damn.
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Member Since: 10/3/2010
Posts: 50,276
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My application was kind of weird, but oh well. 
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Member Since: 4/18/2009
Posts: 30,340
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Member Since: 7/9/2010
Posts: 31,471
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I have no idea which number I am on Katie's list 
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Member Since: 12/31/2010
Posts: 26,257
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Quote:
Originally posted by MrDeeds
Hm, I see, I see 
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What does the bold indicate? 
Quote:
Originally posted by Katie
Sent in my votes. Here are my notes:
10. One of the most creative and effective applications. A definite 'in.'
21. Creative, fun, and still being yourself. Perfect.
One per entry, in random order. Can you find which one is yours? 
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10 or 21. You used the word creative and you said that was a plus, so I think you thought it was good.

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Member Since: 12/3/2011
Posts: 11,947
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Quote:
Originally posted by Katie
Sent in my votes. Here are my notes:
1. Your application was in-depth and creative.
2. You gave great reasons, but I don't know how seriously you're taking this.
3. Nothing really special about yours. The standard "I am top model because..." application.
4. Fabulous application. Your quotes were perfectly used, and you gave us solid reasons.
5. Strong entry, articulate...but nothing to really set you apart.
6. Your honesty is appreciated, but there's not really much to your application.
7. Really short...you could have put more time into making it great.
8. Your application was short, but I see potential.
9. You're trying to be the bitch of this cycle? Mission accomplished.
10. One of the most creative and effective applications. A definite 'in.'
11. Did you type this on mobile? It's really really short.
12. Insipiring application, but almost...generic.
13. Excellent reasons and everything was supported. Great job.
14. It's almost as if your application was a joke and you meant to send in a different one.
15. Wonderful job in setting yourself apart, but not being bitchy. Perfect.
16. Very generic...I got no sense of who you are.
17. Everything a Top Member should be.
18. You didn't really stand out, but I think you're worth moving forward. Make it fierce from now on.
19. Wow. Flawless.
20. Your application was so-so, and your reputation may hold you back.
21. Creative, fun, and still being yourself. Perfect.
One per entry, in random order. Can you find which one is yours? 
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I definitely think I'm 6.
I was worried that it was getting too long for a "short paragraph," but I wish I had elaborated.
I hope the judges see something in me anyway. 
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Member Since: 11/2/2010
Posts: 7,797
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I thought we were supposed to just say what on ATRL made us stand out
...I tried to make mine a bit bitchier...oh godddd I THOUGHT THAT WOULD BE my TRUMP CARRDDDD
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Member Since: 10/24/2011
Posts: 3,702
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I think I am 17, I said something about the qualities a Top Member should have.
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Member Since: 10/13/2011
Posts: 10,375
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Quote:
Originally posted by TOASTY
I thought we were supposed to just say what on ATRL made us stand out
...I tried to make mine a bit bitchier...oh godddd I THOUGHT THAT WOULD BE my TRUMP CARRDDDD
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I feel ya, sis 
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Member Since: 4/24/2011
Posts: 17,221
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Quote:
Originally posted by Katie
Sent in my votes. Here are my notes:
1. Your application was in-depth and creative.
2. You gave great reasons, but I don't know how seriously you're taking this.
3. Nothing really special about yours. The standard "I am top model because..." application.
4. Fabulous application. Your quotes were perfectly used, and you gave us solid reasons.
5. Strong entry, articulate...but nothing to really set you apart.
6. Your honesty is appreciated, but there's not really much to your application.
7. Really short...you could have put more time into making it great.
8. Your application was short, but I see potential.
9. You're trying to be the bitch of this cycle? Mission accomplished.
10. One of the most creative and effective applications. A definite 'in.'
11. Did you type this on mobile? It's really really short.
12. Insipiring application, but almost...generic.
13. Excellent reasons and everything was supported. Great job.
14. It's almost as if your application was a joke and you meant to send in a different one.
15. Wonderful job in setting yourself apart, but not being bitchy. Perfect.
16. Very generic...I got no sense of who you are.
17. Everything a Top Member should be.
18. You didn't really stand out, but I think you're worth moving forward. Make it fierce from now on.
19. Wow. Flawless.
20. Your application was so-so, and your reputation may hold you back.
21. Creative, fun, and still being yourself. Perfect.
One per entry, in random order. Can you find which one is yours? 
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That's probably mine
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Member Since: 4/24/2011
Posts: 17,221
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Atho i made mine short because i didn't notice that we have to talk about ourselves
Next time i guess 
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Member Since: 7/9/2010
Posts: 31,471
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I'm so nervous 
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Member Since: 12/3/2011
Posts: 11,947
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I hope Katie and the rest of the judges give more hints for us to salivate over. 
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Member Since: 10/13/2011
Posts: 10,375
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Quote:
Originally posted by Evun
I hope Katie and the rest of the judges give more hints for us to salivate over. 
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I hope they give some of us a second chance to prove that we're worthy 
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ATRL Moderator
Member Since: 11/1/2010
Posts: 26,750
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Quote:
Originally posted by Evun
I hope Katie and the rest of the judges give more hints for us to salivate over. 
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#1 on my list is a username with 5 letters.
#14 has 11
I gave higher points to people who were creative, original, thoughtful, and gave true representation of who they are.

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