@Niko I didn't think your structure was a mess but then again I didn't think my meter was a mess His review wasn't all that bad tbh, even if you're below the average this week you could very well be safe
39. The Desperate Housewife (Interlude)
Your flow was on POINT! I love your title and the whole concept of this song. You paint the women’s emotions well. If you had elevated the plot and feelings in the song a bit more it could have been my favorite from this round.
Yass I'm glad you liked it. I was so nervous about it.
@Niko I didn't think your structure was a mess but then again I didn't think my meter was a mess His review wasn't all that bad tbh, even if you're below the average this week you could very well be safe
Thank you so much <3
I thought yours was fantastic, the meter was a bit messy but it kind of went with the song and in my opinion made it better (For it being an interlude / intro)
What was your title?
I didn't see it in your PMs. Let me see what GS saidT
His review wasn't all that bad tbh, even if you're below the average this week you could very well be safe 
I'm glad you liked it. I was so nervous about it.