"I like the first verse, my favourite part of the song so far. The only thing is I don't like the word "the", it's a bit awkward if I'm honest. Wait no, the pre-chorus is so much better. The chorus is definitely my favourite part of the song. I like the bridge, but it just comes across a bit awkward, the way it completely makes sense and all. The final chorus is so much better than the other chorus even though it's unchanged! Overall I think it was a good song, just awkward in parts. I'd give this a 4.5."
I really didn't want to have to make a set of "rules" to follow because I thought everyone was either familiar enough with PH or had common sense, but if I have to...
the only person who gave me CONSTRUCTIVE and USEFUL criticism was MattyTacos. but, of course, i would expect nothing less after his stellar role as head judge during s7.
I really didn't want to have to make a set of "rules" to follow because I thought everyone was either familiar enough with PH or had common sense, but if I have to...
Yas daddy lay down the law with me, let me be your prisoner for the night and you can rattle my chains
the only person who gave me CONSTRUCTIVE and USEFUL criticism was MattyTacos. but, of course, i would expect nothing less after his stellar role as head judge during s7.
Ok here's a tip, if you don't want honest feedback from me, please don't send me your songs. I have literally liked every single song i've read, however I just wanted to give advice honestly because that's what I'd hope to get if I sent my songs to you. I wouldn't want you to just stroke my ego and tell me that's it's all good, if there were parts to improve on. And let me tell you that I took everyone's feedback on my song and used it to edit. Honestly, every single recommendation, I took to better my song.
