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Originally posted by ClarksonSlays
29 hours after the challenge and I'm still dying a biT
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I don't get what "still dying a biT" means. You can't "still die", as death is a momentary event with a limited duration, not a long process that can "still" go on at a certain time. You also can't die a biT, you either die or you don't, there's no measurement as to how much you're dying or how dead you are, i.e. : A : "Hey, how are you" / B : "I'm a little dead, how about you? / A : Oh, I'm moderately dead, but my boyfriend is like very dead, so I could be doing worse I guess. Let's buy Lotus.
This entry is overall not a highlight due to to the awkward phrasing. I expected you to do better. Good luck in your future songwriting journey.