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I really like the chorus and the repetition of "baby." I like the mood you established with all of the ice and water related words. There are some parts that come across as slightly non-nonsensical like "My body tries to save me by setting you free" but the song does maintain a whimsical and fun nature despite being about something serious. I do think that the song could benefit from some more rhymes, since the tone is more fun in tone overall, but I thought it was a fun entry in the time given.
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Oh not as bad as I thought it would be!
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There are some parts that come across as slightly non-nonsensical like "My body tries to save me by setting you free
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OK! So this was my concept for that:
I'm referring to frostbite there. Extremities are first affected by frostbite, which is why I reference things extending off the body. (Arms, hands, feet, lips) What's interesting about frostbite is that it's a self-preservation mechanism by your own body: The body cuts off blood circulation to those freezing parts in order to keep the core warm and safe and functioning. So I was trying to say that this cold person in her life is someone she knows she needs to get rid off if she wants to remain safe, but she's so attached (Literally and metaphorically) she can't bring herself to do it.