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Originally posted by Cain
This mostly, all her looks slayed but they're just not working with those 'backgrounds'
Also I feel like she should try to not have a storyline next video, but just make it visually pleasing as she has the looks for it and I feel like the plot here needed some locations (BTS of a video shoot, an art gallery etc) that are just really boring to look at while watching a music video
Oh and the dialogue in the beginning kind of being ruined by the blatant product placement
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I agree, it's boring. If she had a bigger budget she might have been able to pull this off.
She could have shown her progression as a model, from small photoshoots to fashion runway and then she could have cut to her being alone in a hotel, drunk, doing drugs, but she's lonely and misses her friends... She calls her boytoy and they hang out like old times, but with her photographer who starts flirting with them both, which she doesn't like.Then cut to the party at a really impressive art gallery, somewhere visually stunning. She goes in and finds out the photographer used more pics of her boyfriend instead than of her. They try to talk to her, but she refuses to stay and she just runs off into the streets, finally free. idk, something like that.