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Lucid Control - I read this as like some dark trip-hoppy song. The lyrics are definitely more abstract here. I'm not sure I'm feeling some of the repeated lines, the "boys will be boys" line, and the "we were always meant to be" line, as they seem to throw off the tone (which was solidly unsettling overall for me) for me.
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Definitely could be a dark trip-hoppy song, I know it would lean more towards a darker sound for sure tho. The repeated lines were probably my least favorite part in my song too cuz I really liked the first one when I first wrote it and it worked as a repeated line, so then that meant I would have to do it for the rest of the verses. Initially I was only gonna do one per verse but then I just **** it and did two. It added something to the song imo, but I definitely could've worked on them more. I reworked the "we were always meant to be" more than I should've and I still wasn't happy with it at the end, but whatever!
Thanks for the review, solid stuff.
I'm glad you liked the jerky nature of the verse, Bloomers 
