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MattyTacos

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Originally posted by JustLuke

Thank you

Nothing in this world can stop us tonight

Aurora

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Originally posted by MattyTacos

Your flowers didn't make it (to the top 5)

Mess, I thought that Battleground clue was SO clever. Should have known it was too smart to be your clue.

conatus

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Mother And Father (conatus) - A very emotional deep and moving song. Incredibly well written too. Probably one of my favorite of yours!

MattyTacos

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Originally posted by dwuw

I guess time's wasting, tick tocking, lip locking
How can we keep the feelings fresh?
How do we zip lock it?
Wear your heart up on your sleeve
So watch out for pick pockets
I guess to go the distance
We might need to pit stop it
Hold up
I know love can be a beach with no shore
I done count to ten, lost my temper and went back to four
I know sometimes it's hard to realize I'm the man that you need
I had a dream we branched out
Started a family tree
And I feel like that everything we do is overdue
You ask why I love your mom so much
'Cause she's a older you
I wish that you were happy
I guess that's the one thing I should be providing
Ain't no number twos we both ones of ones
And we the oddest couple only human
Except you, you a goddess
Only lying to you when I lie it down just being honest
When you start as friends it's hard to say you're never going back
If I'm not the one then I'm the best mistake you ever had

Jezang Looz

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Broken Wounds (Jezang Looz) - Great storytelling! It really makes the story and song a lot better. Also I don’t think broken wounds is a correct phrase.

I took an artistic liberty with the central theme of having 'Broken Wounds'

But thank you so much glad you liked it!!!

Aurora

All of Matty's reviews are so positive it's impossible to tell who the Top 5 are.

UFO

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Tug Of War (EuphorianSea) - I liked the song but I felt like you could have said a lot more and went more in depth and used more descriptive lyrics to share the feelings of being in the tug of war.

Valid point, didn't want to disrupt the direction of the song tho.

Gladion

Matty

the lyric wasn't even painting

it was printing

Stark

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I liked your song

That's all I need.

UFO

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Originally posted by Sam

All of Matty's reviews are so positive it's impossible to tell who the Top 5 are.

Nah, it's possible.

minho

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Birdsong (BlueM) - I think you have a very strong build up to the chorus, but then the chorus falls flat.

Mess.

But thank you for the review! And thanks Truth Teller, they really help.

Lukey

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I thought the lyrics were very deep and well-written. I usually don’t like war conflicts, mainly in songs but it works here.

Yay! I'll take this, I'm glad you liked it!

MattyTacos

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Originally posted by HausofNiko

Matty

the lyric wasn't even painting

it was printing

Oops sorry sis I wrote the lyric really fast without looking back

Stark

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Originally posted by EuphorianSea

Tug of War

CHORUS
It's a war, a tug of war
And I'm on either side
Not sure if it's worth the fight

It's a war, a tug of war
I'm hanging by a thread
Will I ever reach the end?

VERSE #1
I stare at the horizon's edge
I'm waiting for the sun to set
As I tread between life or death
Can't help but feel inadequate
One word is all it takes to break
But I was already broken
Cruel world, why can't I find a way?
Will the future be unbroken?

PRE-CHORUS
Prayers won't ever give you answers
So why am I searching, searching, searching
Stop light, always stuck on amber
And then I stop hoping, hoping, hoping

CHORUS
It's a war, a tug of war
And I'm on either side
Not sure if it's worth the fight

It's a war, a tug of war
I'm hanging by a thread
Will I ever reach the end?

POST-CHORUS
Even if I try I will never get there
Something from inside holds me back and I'm scared
Even if I lie and I try to get there
Something from inside holds me back and I'm scared

VERSE #2
I'm always one, never a ten
Promises made but never met
I promised to never forget
The twisted road right up ahead
I bleed the shame, I feed the pain
Can't seem to fill this empty space
I run towards, towards my home
Where the insecurities grow

PRE-CHORUS
Prayers won't ever give you answers
So why am I searching, searching
Stop light, always stuck on amber
And then I stop hoping, hoping

CHORUS
It's a war, a tug of war
And I'm on either side
Not sure if it's worth the fight

It's a war, a tug of war
I'm hanging by a thread
Will I ever reach the end?

POST-CHORUS
Even if I try I will never get there
Something from inside holds me back and I'm scared
Even if I lie and I try to get there
Something from inside holds me back and I'm scared

BRIDGE
The birds don't fly by themselves
They have wings to help
I'm currently limbless
Torn apart internally
Eternally wasted
The world on my shoulders
I'll never be fearless
For I fear "fear" itself

CHORUS
It's a war, a tug of war
And I'm on either side
Not sure if it's worth the fight

It's a war, a tug of war
I'm hanging by a thread
Will I ever reach the end?

PRE-CHORUS
Prayers won't ever give you answers
So why am I searching
Stop light, always stuck on amber
And then I stop hoping

POST-CHORUS
Even if I try I will never get there
Something from inside holds me back and I'm scared
Even if I lie and I try to get there
Something from inside holds me back and I'm scared
Even if I try to fight it

Hope you like!

One word is all it takes to break
But I was already broken

I'm always one, never a ten
Promises made but never met

I'll never be fearless (that Taytay reference stan)
For I fear "fear" itself

Aurora

I think 4 is pears' song.

MattyTacos

Sam has already posted the correct top 5, he just placed one song in the wrong #, switched out one song, and ignored another possibility that he brought up

UFO

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Originally posted by dwuw

One word is all it takes to break
But I was already broken

I'm always one, never a ten
Promises made but never met

I'll never be fearless (that Taytay reference stan)
For I fear "fear" itself

Stan for me sis

Stark

So one last time
I need to be, the one, who takes you home
One more time
I promise, after that, I'll let you go
Baby I don't care if you got him in your heart
All I really care is you wake up in my arms
One last time
I need to be, the one, who takes you home

keshaspearsxo

thank you Matty

Aurora

3 = conatus
4 = keshaspearsxo
5 = Eros

I think.