#OTF : I thought this was a well done rap song. You have a great melody and an easy flow to follow. I wasn’t a big fan of the chorus and it felt like it was missing something to make me really like it. But, the verses were very good and your storytelling was on point.
Break The Skyline : It took me until a reread where I finally warmed up to your first verse, it felt a little shaky but gradually got better and flowed nicer over time. I think the transition from the pre-chorus to the chorus was a little messy, but I really enjoyed the chorus.
Claustrophobia : I was actually interested to see your take on your inspiration this week. You didn’t fail me at all. I did think the kitty line was awkward though.
Crystalline : I really liked the song and didn’t have any problems with it. But, I just felt like it didn’t have that final punch to really wow me.
Far Away From This : I thought both verses were impressively and well written with a great melody and flow. But, I didn’t think the pre-chorus and chorus were as good.
Fix : This song is great! But, I wasn’t really feeling the pre-chorus. But, I did love the rest of the song and can actually relate to it a bit.
Flowers : Great storytelling! I love a song that tells a beautiful story. It reminded me of Taylor Swift with her storytelling lyrics. Probably not my favorite song of yours but it’s still really good.
Into You : I thought there were a couple awkward lines like the first 2 in the first verse and the pre-chorus itself but I do love the chorus!
Melt : I thought that this was a cute song and was catchy and easy to read. But it feels like it’s missing that final touch to make it really great.
Rest // Repose : I thought that you had a couple awkward lines here and there like the crawling one, and the asylum line. Otherwise, I did like your song.
Roses : I really liked the song behind your song. I didn’t have any problems with it besides the fact it feels like it was missing something.
Tidal Wave : I wasn’t a huge fan of the second verse but I thought that the rest of the song was great!
Batch #2
Candlelight : I thought this was a great song that definitely had a lot of emotion in it. My favorite part was by far the chorus.
Deep Within : Probably my favorite song by you. It’s obvious you worked hard this week and it really paid off. Such a beautiful song.
Eggs : I really liked the verses but I thought that the chorus fell flat as did the bridge.
End This Show : I didn’t really like the first verse but the second as was the rest of the song were miles better.
I’ll Remember...Forever : Such a beautiful song with great storytelling. I don’t think it had the final punch it needed though.
Ocean Lips : Great song! I actually thought it was very cute and well written. Didn’t have any problems with it really.
Sea And Thunder : This gave me a early R&B Mairah tea. Like something off of Daydream, which is my favorite Mariah album so that’s a good thing.
This Candle Is Our Love : I didn’t really like the repetition of life in the first verse since it was very awkward and didn’t flow. But, I really enjoyed the rest of the song.
Trigger : I didn’t really like the bus line cause it was awkward. The rest of the song was good though, you definitely put emotions into the song and touched a hard topic very well.
What You Feel : I did like the football line but it didn’t have a strong set-up to follow it so it feels kinda random and awkward when it came out of nowhere. Otherwise, I thought the song was very cute but was missing something to make it great
Batch #3
Dreaming Of You : You had some great storytelling and imagery in your writing that made your song very beautiful. I just think the window pane line is awkward.
Flame Out : You have such beautiful storytelling lyrics. I thought your song was great but didn't have that final punch to make me stan hard.
Flowers To Burn : I thought you had a good concept behind the song but the lyrics didn’t seem to flow or transition very well.
Hula Hoop : This is actually a really cute song! I also really liked the planet references, they were very well done and made the song flow better.
Hurt You Back : I thought you had a good concept, but you definitely could’ve developed your idea way more to make it more unique. Plus, i thought there were a couple stiff lines but I liked the chorus.
Painkiller : While I think the love/drug concept has been used many times your strong lyrical writing made it easy to overlook the concept.
Purchase Me : I think you had a good concept except the song as a whole didn’t really feel like one song and that was very confusing. I did like the chorus though.
Same Place : I thought that you had great lyrical storytelling lyrics that progressed your song further and made it a more enjoyable read.
Tree : I actually thought that this song was very cute. I liked the whole song except the second verse, it just didn’t stick with me. Plus, the concept was unique and very well done.
Window Pane : I thought this was an interesting take on your song’s inspiration but it was well done.
Untitled : I really liked the verses but I thought that the pre-chorus and chorus were kinda weak in comparison.
Break The Skyline : It took me until a reread where I finally warmed up to your first verse, it felt a little shaky but gradually got better and flowed nicer over time. I think the transition from the pre-chorus to the chorus was a little messy, but I really enjoyed the chorus.
Matty I knew this was going to be the case. Omg I'm getting better at this. But it is true once you reread the song, it gets better and better. I agree with the transition, I didn't like it that much either but the chorus >>>>>
Tree : I actually thought that this song was very cute. I liked the whole song except the second verse, it just didn’t stick with me. Plus, the concept was unique and very well done.
Dreaming Of You : You had some great storytelling and imagery in your writing that made your song very beautiful. I just think the window pane line is awkward.
Claustrophobia : I was actually interested to see your take on your inspiration this week. You didn’t fail me at all. I did think the kitty line was awkward though.
Y'all hear that ****?????? That's the sound of little birds singing a sweet god-awful tune as they die a slow, miserable death in humanity's dark reflective void of REGRET! Damn when the only negative is a line that's on its way to iconic status, you know you're doing something right. Thanks Matty, you are my everything
But seriously. Not my lyrics getting better with time.
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Break The Skyline : It took me until a reread where I finally warmed up to your first verse, it felt a little shaky but gradually got better and flowed nicer over time
Even without debuting in the top 10 the talent is there. y'all ain't ready it's ok.
You guys will warm up to me too. I'm a slow burner, baby
Batch #1
