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Tournament: THE Vanishing Letter/s S03 [NEW ROUND 10 FOR 2015 I GET IN!]
Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Here's a song I wrote about Austin Mahone.
I don't know the first thing about love
Haven't really reached that chapter yet
But it's all the little things that he does
I'm about to fall, no safety net
Somebody catch me, losing my breath here
He's got a little spell worked up on me
Baby, I'm falling, Hug don't call him
They're telling me, but there's
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
Maybe cause he looks so innocent
I just wanna mess him up a bit
They know that I'm all wrapped up in it
Even if I tried, I couldn't quit
Everyone's watching, gotta use caution
People wanna chat so aimlessly
Whenever we're talking, I'm getting
Lost in everything, but there's
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
Let me tell you something quick about him. All these other girls say there's something slick about him (why?).
Cause his swag's on a hundred and climbing and he got me in this mic booth rhyming.
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
EDIT: Oh, it's next page. Slay.
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Member Since: 1/28/2008
Posts: 34,491
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Quote:
Originally posted by Hug
Here's a song I wrote about Austin Mahone.
I don't know the first thing about love
Haven't really reached that chapter yet
But it's all the little things that he does
I'm about to fall, no safety net
Somebody catch me, losing my breath here
He's got a little spell worked up on me
Baby, I'm falling, Hug don't call him
They're telling me, but there's
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
Maybe cause he looks so innocent
I just wanna mess him up a bit
They know that I'm all wrapped up in it
Even if I tried, I couldn't quit
Everyone's watching, gotta use caution
People wanna chat so aimlessly
Whenever we're talking, I'm getting
Lost in everything, but there's
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
Let me tell you something quick about him. All these other girls say there's something slick about him (why?).
Cause his swag's on a hundred and climbing and he got me in this mic booth rhyming.
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
EDIT: Oh, it's next page. Slay.
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Hug Slay 
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Member Since: 1/28/2008
Posts: 34,491
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 The Judges
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Had Spoken
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Coming ZUNE
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Originally posted by Coming ZUNE
Carrie Underwood - Ever Ever After 2.1
This song fits the theme, however this entry contains a vanishing letter that's why I give this a low score
School Gyrls - Something Like A Party 0.5
Why?, the only happy ending about this is when the song ended 
Adele - Make You Feel My Love 3.6
Lovely song, but too sad to have a happy ending.
ATC - All Around the World 2.5
I don't even get this one...
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LegendE'sheart
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Originally posted by LegendE'sheart
Ever Ever After: 0, didn't follow the vanishing letter rules 
Make You Feel My Love: 2, their is only a promise to have a happy ending but its not a reality
All Around the world: 6, The song made some sense towards some happy occasion I guess.
Something Like A Party 5. when I heard this song I felt as if it would get a happy ending, but in a way that happy ending could change swiftly as well more then the other songs in this round 
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potent
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Originally posted by potent
Hug - ATC - All Around the World (La La La)
I never would've thought of this song in a million years. Nevertheless, it does convey a sense of everlasting happiness and pleasure through its very sensual lyrics. Keeping in mind that the challenge was more difficult for you, I think you did a decent job with this particular entry 7.5/10
Hug - School Gyrls - Something Like a Party
On the other hand, I don't understand this choice at all. It's about partying and living in the moment, there's no sense of a "happy ever after" 2/10
rl231 - Adele - Make You Feel My Love
Similar to Lego House, this song is about someone who yearns for love, not someone who already has it. Therefore, we don't really know if there's a "happy ever after" or not…I gave you the benefit of the doubt on Stay with Me, but I can't really do it here 5.5/10
josh_923 - Carrie Underwood - Ever Ever After
It seems like you made the unfortunate mistake of assuming that the vanishing letters were for the song rather than the artist. This song does fit the theme very well though so I can give you some points for that 4/10
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3528
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Originally posted by 3528
Single "D" - Carrie Underwood - "Ever Ever After" - 1/10. Vanishing Letter. 
Single "J" - Adele - "Make You Feel My Love" - Her music depresses me - 7/10
Single "L" - ATC - "All Around The World" and Single "G" - School Gyrls - "Something Like A Party" - 8/10 ok choices  the other ones were just better.
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Judgemental
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Originally posted by Judgemental
Single G - 6/10
Single L - 8/10.
Single J - 7/10
Single D - 7/10
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Total Scores From The Judges
Hug --- > #HugLyfe
 Team The Lord
School Gyrls - "Something Like A Party" - (Single "G") = 21.5 Pts
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Single "L" - ATC - "All Around The World" - (Single "L") = 31.5 Pts
Total Scores For Both Song = 53 Points
53/2.1 = 25.2 Points
rl231 --- > RL
Team The Lord
Adele - "Make You Feel My Love" - (Single "J") = 25.1 Pts
josh_923 --- > Bitter Pan
Team The Untamed Wrecking Balls
Carrie Underwood - "Ever Ever After" - (Single D) = 14.1 Pts
The
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Contender
Vanish
In
the
Game
Is
josh_923 --- > Bitter Pan
Team The Untamed Wrecking Balls
Carrie Underwood - "Ever Ever After" - (Single D) = 14.1 Pts
 Tnx F0r PlaYing
 SEE YOU ON COMEBACK ROUND AFTER THE NEXT ROUND
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@Hug : 
@Joshua :
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How the ****. 
Now that the round is over, I expected All Around The World to be the one to get clocked.  I didn't even submit it to fit the theme. It just so happened to be in my YouTube history and it fit the letters. 
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Member Since: 1/28/2008
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Originally posted by Hug
How the ****.
Now that the round is over, I expected All Around The World to be the one to get clocked. I didn't even submit it to fit the theme. It just so happened to be in my YouTube history and it fit the letters. |
All Around The World Slays with 31.5 Points 
You're safe again but you have two bottom mark now and in danger for elimination if you show up again in the next round bottom 03 list
You nee a power HUG for the next round
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Member Since: 1/28/2008
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Originally posted by lhdang2000
@Hug :
@Joshua : |
Joshua will be back for comeback round for sure 
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Okay, when is the next round being posted? I need to PERCH to make sure I snatch that immunity and lose one of my bottom 3 marks.
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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I want the overall result but it's 1:53 a.m there in Philippines
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Member Since: 1/28/2008
Posts: 34,491
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Originally posted by Hug
Okay, when is the next round being posted? I need to PERCH to make sure I snatch that immunity and lose one of my bottom 3 marks.
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After i post the overall results 
Probably i try to do it again at my work 
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Originally posted by lhdang2000
I want the overall result but it's 1:53 a.m there in Philippines |
Yeah, my eyes 
Next Round is A FUn ROund F0r Sure 
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Member Since: 5/6/2011
Posts: 26,891
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Quote:
Originally posted by Hug
Here's a song I wrote about Austin Mahone.
I don't know the first thing about love
Haven't really reached that chapter yet
But it's all the little things that he does
I'm about to fall, no safety net
Somebody catch me, losing my breath here
He's got a little spell worked up on me
Baby, I'm falling, Hug don't call him
They're telling me, but there's
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
Maybe cause he looks so innocent
I just wanna mess him up a bit
They know that I'm all wrapped up in it
Even if I tried, I couldn't quit
Everyone's watching, gotta use caution
People wanna chat so aimlessly
Whenever we're talking, I'm getting
Lost in everything, but there's
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
Let me tell you something quick about him. All these other girls say there's something slick about him (why?).
Cause his swag's on a hundred and climbing and he got me in this mic booth rhyming.
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
I don't know what it is
I can't lie, he's on my mind
Something about him
I don't know what it is
Somebody like him is hard to find
He's like the star of my movie
He just does something to me
Can't explain it, can't contain it
I don't know what it is
Something about him
EDIT: Oh, it's next page. Slay.
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Corny 
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josh
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I was so close to being eliminated
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Originally posted by genetic fail
Corny |
asjhbds I didn't even write it; it's another School Gyrls song.
All I did was replace "Mandy" with "Hug" 
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Member Since: 3/14/2013
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Originally posted by ♥jONE731♥
After i post the overall results
Probably i try to do it again at my work
Yeah, my eyes
Next Round is A FUn ROund F0r Sure |
Maybe we'll understand the theme this time
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Member Since: 1/28/2008
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Originally posted by e437
Maybe we'll understand the theme this time |
Maybe Yes and Maybe Not 
But you will be having FUn fun Fun :jone:
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Member Since: 1/3/2011
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Originally posted by rl231
I was so close to being eliminated |
What did you submit again?
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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Originally posted by Zune
What did you submit again?
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No, I was in the bottom 3, but I was barely saved
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I'm ready for the overall and a new challenge. I think I have an idea what the theme will be 
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Overall results coming when jONE ?
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