Originally posted by Keshafied

Here's a song that I've written and did an acoustic version to!! AHHH


https://soundcloud.com/freshsuxx/our-time-original-song

Originally posted by Ryanicorn

Originally posted by Ramos

I just wanted to say that last night @ this club I went the DJ played Wherever You Are out of nowhere and everybody got their life.

Originally posted by Keshafied

Here's a song that I've written and did an acoustic version to!! AHHH


https://soundcloud.com/freshsuxx/our-time-original-song

Originally posted by Keshafied

Here's a song that I've written and did an acoustic version to!! AHHH


https://soundcloud.com/freshsuxx/our-time-original-song

Originally posted by mattpowell578

Hey guys, if you want to follow me on twitter, my username is @musiclo14653025

Originally posted by jaker

Wait, I actually like this

Originally posted by BeyNavi

It's good, however, there are some parts of it that, to me, sound as if they need to be reworked a bit.

Originally posted by Ryanicorn

That name

Originally posted by Keshafied

Haha thanks!


Thanks and yeah. some of the lyrics of parts were a nightmare to rewrite. Literally re-wrote it about 3 times and then changed it again after, and don't get me started on the chords. Was meant to play this on guitar, but my guitar broke

Originally posted by BeyNavi

I never spend much time on my songs let alone rewrite them

Originally posted by Keshafied

So what you think?

Originally posted by Keshafied

I'm usually the same, they normally come naturally to me and can get the lyrics down in about 10 mins. But when I sit down and try to write and re-write, they come out horrible.

Originally posted by jaker

Originally posted by Ryanicorn

Originally posted by BeyNavi

That's the exact reason why I never plan on writing. All of my songs are the product of laying in bed awake at 3am when the words just pour out of me and sometimes they are something that I believe it or not created in my dream

Originally posted by Keshafied

Mine comes out of the blue, but I don't like doing it because I always up in tears from writing about things I try to suppress.