The way she says "ARTPOP" in the chorus makes it sound like she just added the title to it last second and that she struggled to add the word "ARTPOP" into any gap she could in the chorus; I like everything else about that part of the song. The verses were also great until she suddenly added that creepy laughter in the second verse that sounds like a Michael Jackson mess.
If it wasn't for those two messy things, which I pray get fixed in the studio version, I would gladly worship it.
Swine is vile but for me the real low point of her iTunes festival was I Wanna Be With You. The Dope song that she replaced it with (?) seems to have decent lyrics though.
IWBWY isn't bad, just boring. Inching your way back to the Haus.
